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Stacey Cornelius
I'm a writer, jargon translator, idea junkie & creative entrepreneur with a Fine Art degree. I have years of professional experience in retail, theatre, fine craft and information technology.  Read More

How to write your bio and About page without driving yourself crazy

March 8, 2010

There were a couple of responses to my call for your most burning questions that point to an important part of marketing and personal branding: you.

The questions were about name recognition, writing a bio, and how to write an About page for your website. Each requires talking about yourself in a way that engages your audience.

Unless you’ve gone through the process a few times, writing a bio or About page for your website can be stupidly intimidating. You’re not sure exactly what you should write. You want to impress people. You want to sound smart and talented and likeable, or smart and talented and edgy, or smart and talented and sophisticated.

Which might be exactly the wrong approach.

Stop trying to impress people and tell it like it is
You know what happens when you try too hard. You trip yourself up almost instantly, wanting to prove yourself worthy. But it’s not about being worthy—it’s about being real.

Your audience wants to know you, the artist. They want to make a connection with the person who makes the work they want to buy.

Start with the facts
You probably have a resume kicking around somewhere with some important dates on it. The training that gives you professional credibility, years of experience, awards and shows. Take the best pieces and put them into a few paragraphs, along with pertinent facts about your work, and possibly where you were born and where you live now. Make it into a story to engage your reader.

You have probably also read countless bios of other artists, as well as prominent people. Go look at a few, both of people you know, and famous artists. For the sake of quick reference, here’s one on master portrait photographer Yousuf Karsh. Yours won’t read exactly like his (because you’re still here, and probably not world famous), but you get the idea.

There’s no perfect formula
Don’t feel like you have to follow a formula, and don’t feel like there’s only one correct way to write your bio. You don’t have to say where you were born or where you grew up. If you do a little research, you will realize there’s no one style or format. Make sure you have the important information in there, then write what feels most authentic to you. If your audience loves hearing about how many kids and pets you have, write about it, as long as you feel comfortable. If not, leave it out.

Who should you be—I, he, she or we?
Some people like to write about themselves in the third person, and sometimes it’s appropriate. That usually happens in a formal document, when a convention has already been established about writing about yourself as “she,” and it usually involves far too much paperwork and a snooty jury of some kind. Normally you will be you (that is, “I”), unless there are more than one of you, in which case you’ll be a “we,” not an “I.” Don’t use the royal “we,” which is a bit pretentious.

(I was trying to make you laugh, not confuse you. Writing about yourself can be stressful. It shouldn’t be, because you’ve been you all your life, but it is. Not taking yourself too seriously can help keep you grounded.)

The point I’m trying to make is you don’t want to get too complicated or too uptight. Talking about yourself in the first person isn’t narcissistic, it’s factual. If you really want to go with third person, and it fits your personal style, do it.

If you want to write in first person and want a bio that can be used for press coverage, write one in third person and put a link to it on your website for just that purpose (tip: reporters love it when you make their jobs easier).

Your About page—should it really be about you?
If your About page is your bio page, then obviously the answer is yes. But if you offer a service, your About page might focus on your audience, and what you can do for them, with a short bio at the end.

How you organize that information depends on how you set up your website. You can have a Services (or Gallery or Portfolio) page, and an About page that contains your bio. Make it as easy and clear for your website visitors as you can. Some creatives who offer services take a “Who We Are” and “What We Do” approach. Dead easy for anyone visiting the site to figure out exactly what’s on the site.

(Writing tip: technically, none of the above capitalized words are proper nouns, so they shouldn’t be capitalized. I’m just pretending they’re officially named pages so you don’t get confused.)

What to do when you’re stuck
This is an exercise I like to suggest when you can’t get out of your own head: write a letter. An old friend, who you haven’t seen in years, asks what you’ve been up to lately. What would you tell her? Write it down, without editing, until you run out of words. Then leave it for a while, even a day or two, then come back and clean it up—without losing your own voice.

If you’re still stuck, do a W5: who, where, when, what, and why. Adapt as needed. That will give you a basic structure and solid starting point. When you flesh it out, remember that your audience, no matter who they are, connect with your work and you, so you don’t want to back away so much that you disappear.

Be present
The work doesn’t sell itself. If it did, you wouldn’t be thinking about writing a bio, or an About page, or working on marketing. You make the work, and directly or indirectly, you—your reputation, your brand—are a critical part of selling it.

Over to you: what trips you up when talking about yourself? How do you approach writing your bio?

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Comments (17)

I struggled with my “About Me” page for what seemed like ages, until I finally yanked it out of myself. Now it’s become much more personable, open and accessible to people. I feel more like a person now that I’ve finally finished it, and it’s seeping over into other parts of my business — all for the better.

Thank you for reminding us all how to write a great bio without tearing our hair out :)

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Stacey Cornelius Reply:

A lot of people glaze over when they have to start talking about themselves on paper. It’s often easier to talk in person. Not sure why that is, but when someone asks what you’re up to, the words come more freely than when you have to get “official” with it.

Nice that your “About Me” victory spills over into other parts of your business. That’s a bonus shift in thinking. Good on you!

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Oh this is a great post – very helpful. I could have done with this a couple of months ago. I think I may re-do mine having read this (when I get some spare time).

I didn’t know what to write, so I wrote everything! Boring people into submission probably isn’t a great tactic to use! ;o)

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Stacey Cornelius Reply:

Rachel, it’s a process. I’ve edited my own About page twice, and tweaked my profile on my header. I think writing, like gardening, is never really done. You change, your business evolves, so don’t try to set something in stone.

Writing everything is way better than becoming paralyzed and doing nothing, or writing something brief and uptight!

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Oh, I really like the “write a letter” approach, Stacey. That helps to make it feel like I’m talking to someone real and not the great anonymous “them”.

I also got the advice that I could tell a short story about something that called me to what I’m doing, and when I did that I started to actually get emails from people just from reading that page!

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Stacey Cornelius Reply:

It makes a difference when you stop trying to get it right and approach the whole thing with simplicity and sincerity. Isn’t it great to see results?

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Stacey, thank you for this post it has been so helpful! I find myself wanting to get a “quick take” when I read About pages, I do move on after 2 paragraphs so I found it very funny when I read Rachel’s About page…when I skipped down she actually caught me with her little phrase…”oh you have skipped to the end”…that was clever but does prove that shorter may be better!…for me anyway!

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Stacey Cornelius Reply:

I’m glad it helped, Kathy. You can have the best of both worlds–if you want a long About page, you can use subheads or bold text to catch the attention of people who like to skim through quickly. I wouldn’t recommend that for a bio page, particularly not for an artist’s bio, but if you’re offering a service, it’s a good option.

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Great advice! This is an area where many of us get stuck. Interestingly enough, it’s much easier to write about pages, bios, and mission statements for other people.

I just wrote my about page after much procrastination. It sucks, but it’s nice to know that I can change it anytime I want with WordPress :) I just feel funny talking about myself, so I kept the personal info to a minimum.

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Stacey Cornelius Reply:

It’s almost always easier to brag someone else up. There’s no baggage, no voices telling us to indulge in false modesty. And I think your About page is not the least bit sucky.

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I wish I knew you and this info a few months ago. Great exercises to help us take ourselves less seriously!

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Stacey Cornelius Reply:

Hmm, maybe I should have started the blog with this one. But we have to write about ourselves in other ways, so you can use the exercise whenever you feel yourself getting self-conscious.

Glad you dropped by, Marsha, it’s nice to see you here.

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Great post!

I personally can’t stand it when someone who’s clearly just one person writes about themselves in third person on their website. In magazines and newspapers it’s appropriate, so I’d suggest having two versions of the bio – for your use and for external use.

I struggled with my bio for a looong time, looking at other people’s About pages and trying to copy what they’ve done. The problem with it is that it’s not *you* if you copy someone else’s words or ideas. And for most of us creatives, it needs to be *us* and unique to us. So I went ahead and wrote a very personal about page – which really suits the relationships I’m striving to develop with my clients. It’s not for everyone, but it works for me.

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Stacey Cornelius Reply:

The thing about research is you have to remember not to take what you read too literally. See *how* people approach the idea, then do your own thing. Sometimes it takes a while to get yourself into that habit. Maybe it’s a result of too much “repeat after me” when we were little kids in school.

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[...] Personality Does your website copy or print material read like a tourist brochure, or does it sound like you? If I called you on the phone, would I recognize you as the same person who wrote your bio? [...]

I need to give my About page another stab. I can easily write one for my site, but I loathe talking about myself. Currently, I have a bulleted list of things I am/do, although I sorta hate it. I also have a swipe file of awesome About pages from all sorts of folks. I really should browse them again, get inspired, and try again. :D

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Stacey Cornelius Reply:

It’s an evolving thing, Amy, so try not to be too hard on yourself. Writing is never really “done,” anyway.

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